Writing Composition: Transitions

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This lesson will teach students how to connect two different words, phrases, or sentences, especially within or between paragraphs
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WHAT IS A TRANSITION?
In writing, a transition is a word or phrase that connects one idea to another. This connection
can occur within a paragraph or between paragraphs. Transitions are used to show how sen-
tences or paragraphs are related to each other and how they relate to the overall theme of the



USING TRANSITIONS WITHIN A PARAGRAPH
Transitions may be used at various times within a paragraph to show the connections between
sentences. Here are some examples:


Example: The main character displays strength and courage throughout the story. He shows
fear and apprehension when he encounters the antagonist.
Revision: The main character displays strength and courage throughout the story. However,
he shows fear and apprehension when he encounters the antagonist.
Rationale: The use of the transition in this case helps to show the contrast between the two
ideas while also connecting them.


Example: In the novel, there are many tragic events that take place. The prince’s untimely
death occurs two days before the wedding.
Revision: In the novel, there are many tragic events that take place. For example, the
prince's untimely death occurs two days before the wedding.
Rationale: The transition helps to connect the idea to the example that follows.



USING TRANSITIONS BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS
Transitions can be useful between paragraphs to connect two ideas. Effective transitions high-
light the key information from one paragraph to the next and help to create a logic flow be-
tween ideas. These transitions do not always have to use transitional words or phrases; how-
ever, they can be useful. P1 represents the last sentence in paragraph one. P2 represents the
first sentence of paragraph two. The transitional phrase is bolded and italicized.


The author's work includes many examples of symbolism.
In the story, multiple themes are present.
The author's work includes many examples of symbolism.
P2: In addition to the symbolism in the text, multiple themes are present.
Rationale: The transition helps to show how the two paragraphs are related and helps to show
the reader the underlying similarities.




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n the book, many loud sounds prevented the characters from sleeping.
he characters were unable to embark on their journey the next day.


n the book, many loud sounds prevented the characters from sleeping.
| a result of their lack of sleep, the characters were unable to start their journey the
next day.
Rationale: The transition helps to connect the two paragraphs by showing that the event oc-
curring in the second paragraph was a result of the event that was described in the first par-
P1: On Sandy Hook, the light house is located in the north region.
P2: At the tip of Sandy Hook is the Coast Guard Station.
P1: On Sandy Hook, the light house is located in the north region.
P2: Further north, at the tip of the hook, there is the Coast Guard Station.
Rationale: In this case, the transition helps to show the relationship between the locations
of two structures.



[COMMONLY USED TRANSITIONS

Purpose Examples

‘Addition again, also, and, another, as a result, as well as, besides, both,
consequently, equally important, finally, first-second-etc., for ex-
ample, for instance, further, furthermore, however, in addition to,
in fact, in the same way, in the second place, last, likewise, moreo-
ver, next, not only-but also, otherwise, similarly, than, therefore,
thus, too

Concession although, at any rate, at least, even though, granted that, in spite
of, of course, still, thought, while it may be true

Consequence or Result | accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, due to, for this rea-
son, hence, in other words, since, so, so that, then, therefore, thus,
with the result that

Contrast at the same time, but, contrarily, conversely, however, in contrast,
in spite of, nevertheless, nor, notwithstanding, on one hand- on the
other hand, on the contrary, or, rather, while this may be true, yet




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especially, including, in detail, in particular, namely, specifi-
cally, to enumerate, to explain, to list



Emphasis above all, again, also, besides, certainly, furthermore, in ad-
dition, indeed, in fact, in truth, of course, really, surely, truly
Examples as an illustration, for example, for instance, in other words,
in particular, thus, to illustrate
Illustration for example, for instance, in other words, in particular,
namely, specifically, such as, thus, to illustrate

Similarity of Comparison
analogous to, in a like fashion, in a like manner, likewise,

above, across, adjacent, along the edge, around, at the bot-
tom, at the front, at the left, at the rear, at the right, at the
top, behind, below, beneath, beside, beyond, in front of, in
the background, in the center, in the distance, in the fore-
front, nearby, nearer, next to, on the side, on top, opposite,
out of sight, over, straight ahead, surrounding, under, under,
within sight

for this purpose, therefore, to this end, with this in mind,
with this purpose in mind

accordingly, as a result, consequently finally, in brief, in con-
clusion, in short, therefore, thus



after, afterward, another, at first, at last, at length, at the
same time, before, concurrently, during the morning-day-
week-etc., eventually, finally, first-second-etc., for a minute-
hour-day-etc., formerly, generally, immediately, in order to,
in the meantime, last, later, meanwhile, most important,
next, once, ordinarily, previously, rarely, simultaneously,
soon, subsequently, then, to begin with, usually

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